I won't blame you if you decide to put this on your debut album.
It's Not Done.
I don't care about what anyone else thinks, more consideration should have been put into making this. If you're going to tell a story, than as a hole, it needs to feel complete, and this does not feel complete. It's a pretty good story, but with boring and repetitive riffs and absolutely no lyrics, this one just doesn't feel right. It sounds like there isn't enough noise being generated to make the person listening to it feel like he/she is literally being brought out of the real world and sucked into another dimension made entirely of sound. THIS IS HEAVY FUCKING METAL! People need to feel an adrenaline rush whenever they listen to stuff like this. And right now, I have to tell you, I'm bored as hell after listening to this. Look at the big metal bands, Black Sabbath, Metallica, System Of A Down, Megadeth, King Diamond, Motorhead! ALL of these bands captivate their audience and bring them out of thinking about their miserable lives using nothing but music. I'm not saying you should try and be as good as any of these bands, but think about it. Whenever you're making a song, do you ever stop and think about what motivates and inspires you to make music? Look at their achievements and accomplishments and think about what you're going to do differently from them. I'm not lecturing you, I'm just trying to make a point. They're is absolutely nothing stopping me from shutting off my computer and going to the store to pick up a Metallica CD. Think about that next time you try and submit another song. This needs work.
To be honest, I'm pretty sick of the hole techno scene right now, but this was actually pretty good.
Thanx, im pretty sick of it too.
You're not alone, my friend.
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